Thank you for your interest in the game! Your application has been reviewed, and we would like to request some revisions in the following areas:
We would like to see a better delineation of Jensen's personality, the app predominantly describes game mechanics and actions rather than discussing his motivations for said actions, and a little more detail on how he's fallen into the morally grey area and what conflicts he might have with it, as well as a reflection of how he feels about being augmented without his consent.
Note: both links in the application meant to outline his augmentations don't work, the first links back to the application itself and the second links to a locked entry. We cannot deliberate on augmentations we know nothing about and would appreciate a bulleted list or access to the journal entry in question if at all possible.
If you have any questions or would like any sort of clarification on what we would like to see, please don't hesitate to ask!
REVISIONS REQUEST
Thank you for your interest in the game! Your application has been reviewed, and we would like to request some revisions in the following areas:
We would like to see a better delineation of Jensen's personality, the app predominantly describes game mechanics and actions rather than discussing his motivations for said actions, and a little more detail on how he's fallen into the morally grey area and what conflicts he might have with it, as well as a reflection of how he feels about being augmented without his consent.
Note: both links in the application meant to outline his augmentations don't work, the first links back to the application itself and the second links to a locked entry. We cannot deliberate on augmentations we know nothing about and would appreciate a bulleted list or access to the journal entry in question if at all possible.
If you have any questions or would like any sort of clarification on what we would like to see, please don't hesitate to ask!
Thank you again for your interest.