Thank you for your interest in the game! Your application has been reviewed, and we would like to request some revisions in the following areas:
Overall, you have a solid application. We would like for you to write an additional third-person sample as Batman, to showcase that side of the character's thoughts and voice.
If you have any questions or would like any sort of clarification on what we would like to see, please don't hesitate to ask! If you have any questions or would like any sort of clarification on what we would like to see, please don't hesitate to ask! Revisions should be either edited into the existing application in a different font color or in a comment as a response to this revision request.
REVISIONS
Thank you for your interest in the game! Your application has been reviewed, and we would like to request some revisions in the following areas:
Overall, you have a solid application. We would like for you to write an additional third-person sample as Batman, to showcase that side of the character's thoughts and voice.
If you have any questions or would like any sort of clarification on what we would like to see, please don't hesitate to ask! If you have any questions or would like any sort of clarification on what we would like to see, please don't hesitate to ask! Revisions should be either edited into the existing application in a different font color or in a comment as a response to this revision request.
Thank you again for your interest.