DECLINED. Thank you for your interest and application to the Sanctum. Your application has been reviewed and is declined.
After review, we unfortunately have decided to decline your app for the following reasons:
Unfortunately at the moment we're still not feeling as though the representation presented here adequately gives voice to Eames' character motivations or personality. The revisions given do elaborate, but aren't quite what we asked for and tend to lean a bit more on the 'telling' rather than the 'showing' side of things we were hoping to see on the second attempt. Eames - while little is given to us in the film by way of backstory - is still as multi-faceted as any of the others presented within the narrative, and at the moment we're mostly seeing only two or three personality points being reiterated.
DECLINED
Thank you for your interest and application to the Sanctum. Your application has been reviewed and is declined.
After review, we unfortunately have decided to decline your app for the following reasons:
Unfortunately at the moment we're still not feeling as though the representation presented here adequately gives voice to Eames' character motivations or personality. The revisions given do elaborate, but aren't quite what we asked for and tend to lean a bit more on the 'telling' rather than the 'showing' side of things we were hoping to see on the second attempt. Eames - while little is given to us in the film by way of backstory - is still as multi-faceted as any of the others presented within the narrative, and at the moment we're mostly seeing only two or three personality points being reiterated.
You are welcome to reapp Eames after 15 days.
Thank you again for your interest.